I wrote this story using a contest prompt from Writing.com:
square, thread, star.
One
Person’s Treasure…
I counted the money.
“We square?”
he asked.
“I guess.” I just
wanted it over.
“Well, are we?
Don’t want anyone thinkin’ I’m cheatin’ ‘em!”
My temper was
hanging by a thread. I’d just lost my job and my cat, Misty, died
earlier in the week. I counted to ten.
“It’s not that,” I
said. “I need the money, but I hate to part with my--life.”
“Oh, well. That’s
how it goes,” he said, “So if we’re square, I’ll get this junk transferred.”
“Junk?”
“To me it is, lady.”
I handed his two
hundred dollars back.
“Sorry, no deal!”
I tore out of the
parking lot.
Sobbing, I drove
through the fading daylight. A Walmart sign flashed up ahead. I pulled into the
lot and turned off the ignition.
I had prayed. I’d
wished on my wishing star. I’d done everything I could think of. It was no use!
I cried myself to
sleep.
I woke to someone
tapping on my window. It was dark.
“You okay?” he
asked.
I opened the window
just a crack.
“No, I’m not!”
The stranger listened as it poured out of me.
“I’m so embarrassed.”
“Don’t be. I might
be able to help you, ma’am."
“How?”
“Looks like you
have some fine treasures. It just so happens, I’m in the market for some fine
treasures. How much you want?”
I needed a lot more
than my things were worth.
“How about I give
you six hundred for the lot? Cash.”
I got out of the
car.
“It’s not worth
that much, sir.”
“It is to me,” he
said.
He handed me the
money.
Before I could
thank him, he got back into his car and drove off without the treasures.
I looked up into
the starry sky.
“Thank you! Thank
you!”
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